“If it looks
like a duck, swims like a duck, and quacks like a duck, then it probably is a
duck.” However, if it looks like a scholarly article, swims like a scholarly
article, and quacks like a scholarly article, it might really be a bunch of
random nonsense assembled by the SCIgen generator. It turns out that things are
not always as they appear to be when it comes to writing. Conventions make it
easy to fool us into thinking that a written work is valid because it coincides
with our idea of what it should be. “In Times of Uncertainty: Predicting the
Survival of Long-Distance Relationships” is a real scholarly article written by
a group of psychologists who put a huge amount of work into their research.
However, when put side by side with a nonsensical article from the SCIgen
generator a reader may not be able to recognize which one is a load of crap.
The scholarly article “In Times of
Uncertainty: Predicting the Survival of Long-Distance Relationships” is a great
example for how the SCIgen genre generator gets away with its trickery. The
main comparison that can be made between “In Times of Uncertainty: Predicting
the Survival of Long-Distance Relationships” and an article that SCIgen
generates is a comparison between the structural conventions. Both articles
start with an abstract that lets the readers know what information they should expect
to receive, although the SCIgen articles give the reader very little information
considering it’s just a bunch of fluff. Another convention related to the
structural elements of the articles is the scientific/important looking graphs
and figures. Graphs are likely a convention of scholarly articles because they are
a convenient way to organize information that has been researched in a way that
is also easy for readers to comprehend. A final important structural convention
to compare is the list of references. SCIgen articles always have a long list
of references at the tail end of their articles and the same can be said for “In
Times of Uncertainty: Predicting the Survival of Long-Distance Relationships”.
References are an immensely important element of the structure of these
articles. When we read scholarly articles we expect a long list of references
because we assume that a lot of work and research went into composing the
articles. If there were no references, the reader may question the credibility
of the author/authors and the validity of the information being presented.
Rhetorical
analysis is a bit difficult when it comes to the papers created by SCIgen
because it is essentially a lot of nonsense. One thing that both articles have
in common is the audience they are writing for. These articles are aimed at
students or other fairly well-educated individuals who have an interest in
their field of study. Credibility, or ethos, plays a role in these articles in
a lot of forms. The articles have a formal tone and include a list of
references because they don’t want the audience to question their credibility. The
final element of rhetoric that the articles have in common is visual literacy.
These articles use visual literacy in the same way, through graphs and charts,
in order to present their data clearly and concisely.
I think it’s important to note that in order
for the researchers to arrive at their conclusion about long-distance
relationships they had to put in a significant amount of time. The researchers
had to do initial interviews with the couples and then wait a year before the
final interviews that gave them the information they needed to evaluate the
results. The time elapsed from the beginning to the end of the study shows that
the researchers see a value in the information being presented. The
researchers/writers did a good job of organizing the information in a way that
makes it easy to follow. They conveniently labeled the content of each section
in either italics or bold so that the reader would know the content of that particular
section. This was a good writing decision because it breaks the text up in a
way that makes it seem less overwhelming from the standpoint of the reader. This
makes it so that the main conclusion of the study, “being geographically
distant from a partner enhances interpersonal risk and stress…”, can be found
even if the reader is disinterested in all the scientific mumbo-jumbo.
Reading an actual scholarly article demonstrates
the validity of the SCIgen generator. The generator simply plays with the
conventions we have established in our heads for what a scholarly article
should look like. Our assumptions about genres can lead us awry and knowing
that can help ensure we don’t assign value to a work that holds no value simply
because it follows the conventions of its genre.

I love your hook and introduction to your PB2A! After reading it, it made me want to improve upon my own, for I lacked these factors. The structure of your PB was very organized. I liked how you would list one similarity and explain the significance and reason for why the convention is important. However, perhaps you can add even more aspects that your scholarly article and the SCIgen articles do not share? What would account for the differences between the conventions if both are classified as scholarly articles? I also want to commend your conclusion/last few sentences. Smart idea to wrap up the PB by mentioning the value of understanding conventions.
ReplyDeleteYour title is too funny. It totally caught my attention right away, which by the way is a big deal because I can never come up with a funny title for my work. The hook was also very funny and started out your paper in a light and humorous way, which I appreciate. I also like the fact that you used things we talked about in class like "fluff" and jargon (which is what I'm assuming you meant by mumbo-jumbo). I really liked your PB but I felt like you didn't give much background information on either of your sources. It was good but if I had never used SCIgen before I wouldn't know what you are talking about. Other than that I liked what you had to say. I hope that didn't sound harsh, I know sometimes I cringe at what people have to say about my writing. I hope my feedback helps you on your future PBs and WPs!
ReplyDeleteYour title and your introduction paragraph gained my attention and interest right away! I really like how when you wrote this post you kept in mind that you are writing to college students. You wrote more informally and included some humor, which definitely keeps your audience engaged throughout your entire blog. You focused a lot on the physical aspects of how conventions look in scholarly articles, but I think it would be beneficial to also expand more on their importance. It would also be very neat if you included direct quotations within these articles to really get your point across. Overall, great post!
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